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Issue #26634: ADV08_Vim_Terminal_Marketing_SubPlans: typos
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Incorrect: Vim Ambassador Correct: Vim! Ambassador Incorrect: The Vim Ambassador program was going well for a while, but recently our staff have been having problems with crime. Correct: The Vim! Ambassador program was going well for a while, but recently our staff have been having problems with crime. Menu Items; Item ID 2: Incorrect: Despite initial protest by the R&D team at our request for a drink that captured "The taste of Maine", the test formula they have developed seems to be very popular with tasters. Very strange considering the #1 term used to describe the flavor so far has been "fishy". Correct: Despite initial protest by the R&D team at our request for a drink that captured "The Taste of Maine," the test formula they have developed seems to be very popular with tasters. Very strange considering the number one term used to describe the flavor so far has been "fishy." Menu Items; Item ID 3: Incorrect: Market studies are showing that 87% of test group subjects feel "Excited" and "Intrigued" by the print ads. 56% said they would be likely to buy a bottle of Vim after seeing these ads. Correct: Market studies are showing that 87% of test group subjects feel "excited" and "intrigued" by the print ads. 56% said they would be likely to buy a bottle of Vim! after seeing these ads. |