Incorrect: My name is Bill Sutton and I'm the foreman at Warwick Homestead. We got a little synth problem here and I'm looking for a hired gun to take care of it.
Correct: My name is Bill Sutton
, and I'm the foreman at Warwick Homestead. We got a little synth problem here
, and I'm looking for a hired gun to take care of it.
Incorrect: I plan to take over the farm when Roger's gone and I need it to look legitimate.
Correct: I plan to take over the farm when Roger's gone
, and I need it to look legitimate.
Incorrect: I want this done soon, or I'm going to take matters
in to my own
hand and then you missed your chance at a even bigger haul then what you already got.
Correct: I want this done soon, or I'm going to take matters
into my own
hands and then you missed your chance at
an even bigger haul then what you already got.