Menu Items; Item ID 1:
Incorrect: History of
Vim Presentation
Correct: History of
Vim! Presentation
Incorrect: Covers the history of the company, the Reed family, and the unique following of the
Vim beverage.
Correct: Covers the history of the company, the Reed family, and the unique following of the
Vim! beverage.
Incorrect:
Run time 45 minutes.
Correct:
Runtime 45 minutes.
Menu Items; Item ID 2:
Incorrect: Guided tour of the
Vim Factory, showing how the beverage is made, bottled and shipped.
Correct: Guided tour of the
Vim! Factory, showing how the beverage is made, bottled
, and shipped.
Incorrect: 20% discount if purchased with History of
Vim Presentation Pass.
Correct: 20% discount if purchased with History of
Vim! Presentation Pass.
Menu Items; Item ID 3:
Incorrect: Founded in 1931,
Vim is one of the oldest soda pops in the country.
Correct: Founded in 1931,
Vim! is one of the oldest soda pops in the country.
Incorrect: Though it has been slower to reach a national audience than certain other brands,
Vim is a state tradition, and may soon be named the official state drink!
Correct: Though it has been slower to reach a national audience than certain other brands,
Vim! is a state tradition, and may soon be named the official state drink!
Incorrect: If you will follow me to the theater, you can see a short film on the history of
Vim.
Correct: If you will follow me to the theater, you can see a short film on the history of
Vim!
Menu Items; Item ID 4:
Incorrect: NOTE: Wait for guests to congregate after 10 minute break following the History of
Vim presentation.
Correct: NOTE: Wait for guests to congregate after 10 minute break following the History of
Vim! presentation.
Incorrect: Now that you've seen the history of
Vim, we will soon begin the Factory Tour and Tasting, where you can see how our beloved beverages are made and try out some of the new flavors we are currently developing.
Correct: Now that you've seen the history of
Vim!, we will soon begin the Factory Tour and Tasting, where you can see how our beloved beverages are made and try out some of the new flavors we are currently developing.
Incorrect: We are also now shipping internationally if you want to send a case of
Vim home or to a loved one!
Correct: We are also now shipping internationally if you want to send a case of
Vim! home or to a loved one!
Issue Data
Issue #27272: ADV08_Vim_Terminal_Tour: typos