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Issue #27335: Typos in The Cabin In the Woods
"He decided he would save some gold and decided to cross the pine forest on foot" should maybe be "He decided he would save some gold and cross the pine forest on foot". "staring at the barricaded door shaking" should be "staring at the barricaded door, shaking".
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Fixed the second issue only.
The first issue is somewhat awkward with "decided" in there twice but isn't necessarily wrong.
The first issue is somewhat awkward with "decided" in there twice but isn't necessarily wrong.
Agreed: my inner editor just cringed at the repetition of "decided," but...
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