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Issue #28355: DmndPiperTerminal: additional typos
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Incorrect: What would <Alias.PronounPos=Player> fresh set of eyes say about how far we've come? Correct: What would <Alias.PronounObj=Player> fresh set of eyes say about how far we've come? Incorrect: To my surprise, <Alias.Pronoun=Player> did not have much to say about <Alias.PronounPos=Player> life in the vault at all. Correct: To my surprise, <Alias.Pronoun=Player> did not have much to say about <Alias.PronounObj=Player> life in the vault at all. Incorrect: That's right, <alias=player> isn't just a vault dweller, <Alias.Pronoun=Player>'s an original vault dweller. <Alias.PronounCap=Player> spent <Alias.PronounPos=Player> entire time on the inside cryogenically suspended. Correct: That's right, <Alias=Player> isn't just a vault dweller, <Alias.Pronoun=Player>'s an original vault dweller." <Alias.PronounCap=Player> spent <Alias.PronounObj=Player> entire time on the inside cryogenically suspended. Menu Items; Item ID 4: Incorrect: What would <Alias.PronounPos=Player> fresh set of eyes say about how far we've come? Correct: What would <Alias.PronounObj=Player> fresh set of eyes say about how far we've come? Incorrect: In speaking to <Alias.PronounObj=Player>, <Alias.Pronoun=Player> stressed that <Alias.PronounPos=Player> time inside the vault was normal. Correct: In speaking to <Alias.PronounObj=Player>, <Alias.Pronoun=Player> stressed that <Alias.PronounObj=Player> time inside the vault was normal. Incorrect: This reporter knows that life behind the sealed gear doors of a Vault-Tec facility is supposed to be a bastion of the old world. Correct: This reporter knows that life behind the sealed gear doors of a Vault-Tec facility is supposed to be a bastion of the Old World. Menu Items; Item ID 5: Incorrect: What would <Alias.PronounPos=Player> fresh set of eyes say about how far we've come? Correct: What would <Alias.PronounObj=Player> fresh set of eyes say about how far we've come? Incorrect: <Alias.PronounCap=Player> began our interview joking about <Alias.PronounPos=Player> time in the vault. Correct: <Alias.PronounCap=Player> began our interview joking about <Alias.PronounObj=Player> time in the vault. Incorrect: Of course, this reporter knows that life behind the sealed gear doors of a Vault-Tec facility is actually supposed to be a bastion of the old world. Correct: Of course, this reporter knows that life behind the sealed gear doors of a Vault-Tec facility is actually supposed to be a bastion of the Old World. Menu Items; Item ID 6: Incorrect: And even though they were in the relative safety of a Vault, someone broke in, and took Shaun from his parent, Correct: And even though they were in the relative safety of a vault, someone broke in, and took Shaun from his parent, Menu Items; Item ID 7: Incorrect: So much of civilization was lost when the bombs fell, and we have rebuilt without the comfort and security of the old Vaults. Correct: So much of civilization was lost when the bombs fell, and we have rebuilt without the comfort and security of the old vaults. Incorrect: And even though they were in the relative safety of a Vault, someone broke in, and took Shaun from his parent, Correct: And even though they were in the relative safety of a vault, someone broke in, and took Shaun from his parent, Menu Items; Item ID 8: Incorrect: How curious, though, that <Alias.PronounPos=Player> first reaction to the horrors and tragedies out there would be humor? Correct: How curious, though, that <Alias.PronounObj=Player> first reaction to the horrors and tragedies out there would be humor. Incorrect: And even though they were in the relative safety of a Vault, someone broke in, and took Shaun from his parent, Correct: And even though they were in the relative safety of a vault, someone broke in, and took Shaun from his parent, Menu Items; Item ID 9: Incorrect: And even though they were in the relative safety of a Vault, someone broke in, and took Shaun from his parent, Correct: And even though they were in the relative safety of a vault, someone broke in, and took Shaun from his parent, Menu Items; Item ID 10: Incorrect: I asked <alias=Player> to make a statement to Diamond City. Correct: I asked <Alias=Player> to make a statement to Diamond City. Menu Items; Item ID 11: Incorrect: I asked <alias=Player> to make a statement to Diamond City. To give us an outsider's perspective on what it means to lose a loved one, and how he feels. Correct: I asked <Alias=Player> to make a statement to Diamond City. To give us an outsider's perspective on what it means to lose a loved one, and how <Alias.Pronoun=Player> feels. Menu Items; Item ID 12: Incorrect: I asked <alias=Player> to make a statement to Diamond City. To give us an outsider's perspective on what it means to lose a loved one, and how he feels. Correct: I asked <Alias=Player> to make a statement to Diamond City. To give us an outsider's perspective on what it means to lose a loved one, and how <Alias.Pronoun=Player> feels. Menu Items; Item ID 15: Incorrect: This surely means greater underground expansion, as well increased range of their teleporter technology (which, until recently, had been a closely-guarded Institute secret). Correct: This surely means greater underground expansion, as well as increased range of their teleporter technology (which, until recently, had been a closely guarded Institute secret). Menu Items; Item ID 16: Incorrect: This reporter hold onto hope, for one very specific reason. Correct: This reporter holds onto hope, for one very specific reason. Incorrect: it would seem that lonely figure who came into our settlement searching for a missing child actually found the monster that had taken so many children. Correct: It would seem that lonely figure who came into our settlement searching for a missing child actually found the monster that had taken so many children. |