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Issue #29030: DN150WestEverettSubTerminal1: typos
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Incorrect: <empty> Correct: Wayne's Terminal Header Text: Incorrect: <empty> Correct: Property of the Tournquist family Menu Items; Item ID 1: Incorrect: We made it back here into our bunker just as the planes started going over head. Correct: We made it back here into our bunker just as the planes started going overhead. Incorrect: I can still hear gun fire out there. Bonnie, I don't know if you are still out there but I'm praying you are. Correct: I can still hear gunfire out there. Bonnie, I don't know if you are still out there, but I'm praying you are. Menu Items; Item ID 3: Incorrect: It sound likes the fighting down there is really bad, I hope you're safe hon. Correct: It sounds likes the fighting down there is really bad. I hope you're safe, hon. Menu Items; Item ID 4: Incorrect: We didn't have any more in the house so I tried to sneak over to the Cobb's house across the street. He was working with the construction crew in the neighborhood so I figured he might have some. Correct: We didn't have any more in the house, so I tried to sneak over to the Cobb's house across the street. He was working with the construction crew in the neighborhood, so I figured he might have some. Incorrect: He told me to turn around slowly, and oh god Bonnie, his face. Correct: He told me to turn around slowly, and oh god, Bonnie, his face. Menu Items; Item ID 5: Incorrect: Happy Birthday Bonnie. I don't know if you are still out there, but it's your 30th so David and Michael made you a cake. Correct: Happy Birthday, Bonnie. I don't know if you are still out there, but it's your 30th, so David and Michael made you a cake. Incorrect: The Ames's and I have been busy the past few months. Correct: The Ameses and I have been busy the past few months. Incorrect: It was another month before we had the rest of the wall ready, but we've been keeping watch shifts since then, and the kids all have enjoyed getting to come out side. Correct: It was another month before we had the rest of the wall ready, but we've been keeping watch shifts since then, and the kids all have enjoyed getting to come outside. |