Cutting Room Floor

DialogueShorsStoneGatheringScene03
[0006A770]: "It's no feast in their neck of the woods either. Last time I was up there, father said they were barely scraping by.

"Father" should be capitalized here since it is a family title being used in place of the referred person's name (grammar rule link).


C01FollowMeTopic
[0006F6C0]: "You're going to be my Shield-Sister?"

"Shield-Sister" doesn't need to be capitalized here.


C01SkjorObserverSplit
[0006F6C2]: "Aela will be your Shield-Sibling on this venture, whelp."

"Shield-Sibling" doesn't need to be capitalized here.


CR03FinishQuestBranchTopic
[00054759]: "These look like good quality, too. I know it's not the glamorous, heroic work, but don't be surprised if I ask you to do it again."

The comma between "quality" and "too isn't needed here since there isn't a pause in the audio. The word "too" also isn't being used in the middle of a sentence to emphasize a change in thought (grammar rule link).


WindhelmHellos
[00035023]: "My job? Well, I'm the Watcher of the Wheel! Which is... exactly what it sounds like. I watch the Wheel."

"Wheel" likely shouldn't be capitalized in the last sentence. It isn't in another hello topic: 00035024.


FreeformWinterholdCollegeBIlasteiBranchTopic
[000E338E]: "I found Ilas-tei. Here's proof."

The "t" in "Ilas-Tei" should be capitalized.


FreeformWinterholdCollegeBStage10BranchTopic
[000E3510]: "Any word from the missing Apprentices?"
[000E3533]: "No, and after what you've discovered I fear the worst for them."

"Apprentices" doesn't need to be capitalized in this instance.
There should probably be a comma between "discovered" and "I." There's a noticeable pause in the audio.


FreeformWinterholdCollegeBFinalBranchTopic
[000E3538] (line 1): "Well, all of the previous Apprentices have been accounted for, thanks to you."
[000E3538] (line 3): "Oh dear, I didn't mean to say it like that. That wasn't a joke, really."

"Apprentices" doesn't need to be capitalized in this instance.
The subtitle doesn't quite match the audio. The subtitle should read: "Oh dear, I... I didn't mean to say it like that. That wasn't a joke, really."


MGRejoinFinalBranchTopic [0005CA07]: "The Jarl has been appeased."

"Jarl" doesn't need to be capitalized.


MGRejoinInitialBranchTopic
[0005AE8B]: "I'm afraid so. There's a problem with one of the Jarls here in Skyrim."

"Jarl" doesn't need to be capitalized.


MGRejoinInitialExplanation2
[0005AE8D]: "We have, of course, severed all ties with the mage in question, but the Jarl isn't appeased."

"Jarl" doesn't need to be capitalized.


DialogueGenericWitchhuntersPlayerHasDaedricBranchTopic
[000B310B]: "Stop! We know you're holding a Daedric artifact. Hand it over."

"Daedric" doesn't need to be capitalized.


DialogueGenericWitchhuntersPlayerHasDaedricTopic02
[000B3107]: "The Vigil of Stendarr cleanses all Daedric filth from Tamriel. Give us any artifacts you have, or we'll purge you like all the others."

"Daedric" doesn't need to be capitalized.


CR03IntroBranchTopic
[00054763]: "We've got some traders coming in, and are short on Cave Bear pelts.
[00056BA5]: "We've got some traders coming in, and are short on Bear pelts."
[00056BA6]: "We've got some traders coming in, and are short on Snow Bear pelts."
[00056BA7]: "We've got some traders coming in, and are short on Sabre Cat pelts."
[00056BA8]: "We've got some traders coming in, and are short on Snow Sabre Cat pelts."
[00056BA9]: "We've got some traders coming in, and are short on Ice Wolf pelts."
[00056BAA]: "We've got some traders coming in, and are short on Wolf pelts."

The name of the animal in each of these subtitles technically doesn't need to be capitalized.
Side note: They are also capitalized in one or more journal entries (quest stages and quest objectives tabs), but since a variable is used to determine the type of pelt generated in the text they're going to be capitalized in the journal no matter what. Plus, I doubt you'd want to mess with objective quest text even if they weren't being auto-generated since the developers tend to capitalize most every word with more than three or four letters in most cases anyway (just like we've discussed before with FO4).