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Issue #31615: Book3ValuableDwarvenAutomatons: typos
Incorrect: As it lumbered closer, its feet struck the ground as if walking on massive pistons and as it loomed out of darkness, I could see it clear for the first time, axe for one hand, hammer for the other, as tall as five men, made of dull bronze with a face molded in the image of its masters. {unneeded extra space between "darkness," and "I"}
Correct: As it lumbered closer, its feet struck the ground as if walking on massive pistons and as it loomed out of darkness, I could see it clear for the first time, axe for one hand, hammer for the other, as tall as five men, made of dull bronze with a face molded in the image of its masters. Incorrect: It came at me with hammer and axe, inhuman strength and great fortitude, and a purpose of nothing but murder. {unneeded extra space between "fortitude," and "and"} Correct: It came at me with hammer and axe, inhuman strength and great fortitude, and a purpose of nothing but murder. |